Easy to Use Subway in Korea
Most Korean usually use subway station in Korea. Kamloops doesn't have it, so I will talk about how you can use subway in Korea. You will be easy to use, if you follow each sentences. First of all, find a ticket machine. If you can't find that, you can ask some Korean. Most Korean is kind and they will help you. Second, put coins in a ticket machine. You can change money in help desk if you don't have coins. Third, when you put the coins in a ticket machine, you have to choose button how much cost. You will get a pass. Then put the pass in pass machine and get back the pass. When you arrive at your destination, you can reverse above sentences. Is it easy? I think it is easy for you.
7 comments:
February 10, 2009 at 9:32 PM
Hello my best friend. I think too it is easy to use, so when I come to your home, you have to show me the subway. Because Saudi Arabia doesn't have subway.
In second sentence I think if you change-talk-to write will be better.
In sixth sentence you have a mistake.Change-dosen't-to don't.
In third sentence you missed-a- a ticket machine.
Maybe I have wrong.
good job Jon
Saud
February 10, 2009 at 9:48 PM
Thank you saud ^^ i'm changing advice now.
Actually, I thought I'll change my topic, but I didn't do that. I'm so tired.
Thank you for comment !
- Jon
February 11, 2009 at 1:27 PM
Hi Jon !
I miss the subway ..you too?
and I can make the 떡볶이.. but I don't have ingredients! so sorry ~ kk
February 11, 2009 at 10:29 PM
February 11, 2009 at 10:32 PM
Hello Jon
I have read what you wrote that it was interesting to write about things you lost in your country.
February 12, 2009 at 9:58 AM
Hello Jon
I have read your paragraph. It is a good paragraph. If I can go to Korea, I will try to use the subway follow the sentence
February 12, 2009 at 12:41 PM
Hi,
I had read your paragraph. You did a good job for the grammar, but I think you shoud write more to make the paragraph longer as better.
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